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EDIT: it was glitching on some places ;w;


All made with paintool sai :3

People forced me aaaaa...
no they didnt really...only got thousand suggestions , lots of them.
But I finally asked help to my buddy :iconmartz-9o:
and :iconlittleponycute: , :iconxxmalina-chayaxx: and :iconhypergs: thanks for coming at the livestream and helping me out for the right choice of the background :)
and thanks for the support.. 

So..
I finally drew efil again
and not just Efil..
She is wearing clothes.. My clothes :dummy: (someone gave me that idea :la: )
I am so glad it turned out okay..
this thing took me in total 7 hours (hah livestream you are so usefull..)
but became awesome at least.. that are the words from the people who watched the livestream.
I won't do another one soon.
I made cute efil and I hope it's good enough..
you can find alot details on her..
her shirt I have too.. but then a bit different and yes I mostly wear no shoes or socks ....
Often I do.. but my shoes aren't gorgeous or drawable..

ah well.. I am going to bed now.
thank you all for this awesome year.
this be the last thing I post this year <3
I am tired.. really tired.

Art by :iconlifegiving:
character: (efil frozen) belongs to :iconlifegiving: (c)

ONLY :iconlifegiving: has all rights on this.
if you want to do anything with it , ask !

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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay so here we go:
first impression:
The first thing I noticed were the colors you used and the shading style. It also looked a bit crowded at first.

Positives and negatives:
Shading: There's a lot going one with the shading. It's very detailed with all the strands of hair showing!
► It looks great on fur and hair,but on clothes, teeth and other fabrics it doesn't work. For example her hat looks like it was made of straws and I don't think that is the case.
► You can keep using this shading technique on hair,fur and muzzles but you might want to use textures instead on clothes.
► There doesn't really seem to be a light source, there's a shadow on the flap of her hat but it doesn't show on her head which takes away the effect.
► The eye looks very detailed and realistic! good job on that!

Anatomy is always one of the hardest things to grasp and also the hardest to critique. I have to tell you that I'm not a pro at it and thus some of the things I say may not be accurate or real. So take it with a grain of salt!
► The first thing I noticed were the legs, since the other parts are kind of hidden. I'm not sure what her left leg is doing because it seems to come towards use because it's longer and overlaps the other, but then it goes back suddenly.
► The leg that bends also seems to be a lot longer than the one on the floor.
► I'd say that you make her right leg longer and maybe her skirt too.

Background: The colorscheme really pulls the attention away from the character. Red and Cyan are complementary colors and both really intense so it looks really 'busy'.
► You have to decide what is going to be the center of attention, the character or the background. If it is the character, don't make the background so bright and vice versa.
► I usually use one of the colors that is on the character and make it a bit lighter/ more neutral.

• Other than that this piece looks great! Keep it up ^u^

Star ratings
Vision: The overal picture looks too bright and there are too many clashing colors
Originality: It's a character standing/ walking so that's been done lots of times before, the character looks unique though.
technique: Everything I said about shading,textures, background and making it look like a whole.
Impact:The pciture sure had a big impact on me when I first saw it, but it wasn't a very good one <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>